Syck:Spittin' 'flows' like 'crazy' cause I'm '2' hot 'bove tha colla
You a broke bitch, look he's in tha hole forty four dollaz (rapperz guy)
(aiight opener)
Rip you...tear you...my presence begins to scare you
Battlin' a weak fuck...? Haha, why did I even care to?
(ok...basic.....but ok)
You got Ill Statements? Maybe about health care
You so broke, if you was tha President you still be on welfare
(whack....Ill Statements about health care...sounds like u wanted 2 rhyme so bad with da punch n da next line u put anyhing)
Bitch you shoulda stopped actin' ran for govenor like Schwartzy
If you fuckin' 'Mini-Me' is tha only way you gettin' a shorty
( top line could of been a whole lot betta...da mini me is ur best line yet)
Back down, clown, give up because you couldn' be an infection
Only way you flow too crazy is movin' in traffic goin tha otha direction
(ok closer....nice last line...good punch)


F2C:This boy syck is a waste of space, his shit is wack n he is a disgrace,
To all the rappers in this place, this boys rite he is sick,
(u gotta b kiddin me......*lost for words*)
Sick in the head thinkin he can kick, rhmyes that sound slick,
Shoulda stayed anotha no show, i know ur terrified of my flow
(flow2basic should b ur name.....)
That melts mc's like snow, Ur syck cuz u got pnuemonia,
Not from ur flow that stinks like ammonia, I got shorties like Sonya n Tonya,
(I see u thrown punches but u hittin all air)
Im the leader of the game, im constantly makin u look lame,
All of ur words sound the same, U make less sense than a change machine,
(think longer on punches)
Ur destruction was easily forseen, cuz ur rhymes were too routine...
( actually.....u was too routine)
Overall:

Syck:Some nice punches. Ok wordplay. no meta's. Try to get more personal and make da diss more direct.Dont rush ur rhymes....take ur time.

F2C:Stretched lines, no good structure, and an off flow. Punches were weak, try usin more personals different words. Ur verse was too predictable and rhyme scheme 2 simple.

v/Syck

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