yO this was some deep shit. honest to god some of this shit had me thinking
i could see the picture you was painting clearly."tears spray off her face as my years fray, momma asking why as i whisper dont fear pray"
that line stood out the most to me.

the hook is good, not as good as the verses, but good
i give this piece a 8.5 cause u might make it better.

" If life's a test, what you gotta do to pass?
who decides when you fail and whats the name of the class?
how many credits is it worth? Im ahead of my verse,
If Heavens up in the clouds, why they put us in the dirt?
hotshh