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Old 07-28-04, 06:30 PM   #6
Magic5
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Voted For: Yung Duke

Battle Verse 1
structure is pretty good...flow is good for the most part...no multis...wordplay is pretty weak...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is also pretty good...flow is good...no multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had decent wordplay...neither had multis...Battle Verse 2 had more connecting punches...as well as better personals...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote..

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 2

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