Yall say my raps need better structure
Yall feedbac is my instructor,
I thank yall fa lettin me know
If my raps are rite or if they ruffa,
I look to yall fa sum help
Makin sure critasium gets dealt,
I thank yall fa feelin my drops
Cuz my rappin neva stops!
I want to thank erybody who has given me sum helpful feedbac.
An ask dat you keep do it. THANx