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Old 07-29-04, 02:38 PM   #10
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Well, I'm Prolly Not The Best Person To Judge This Because I Dont Do Audio...
So To Me I See A Weak TEXT Piece...
But I Know You Cant Put The Same Shit Into Audio As You Can Text...
But I'll TRY And Critisize With That In Mind...
Flow Was Pretty Tite, Content Was Pretty Decent...
Uuuuum Only Thing I Would Say Needs Work, Hook And Chorus...
Hook Should Diffrent Then The Chorus In My Opinion, Its More Like Drawing In The Listener But Without Showing All Abilities...
And The Chorus Can Be Alittle More Technical...
But Oooooother Than That...
Nice Drop Mayn...
~One~
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