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Old 07-29-04, 04:18 PM   #4
Kizza
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I liked it nice steady even flow, good wordplay. I thought it was well done. lines coulda been a bit longer to shorten up the verse but other than that it was good.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138209

hit mine up, lemme know what u think.
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