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Old 07-30-04, 03:04 AM   #29
A.M.O.K
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Jacket
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
Wtf?Sucking up to him?
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
Blah, non flowable
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
No, that is just wack
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
Blah, coppied/Justify do not rhyme
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried
No... that was wack aswell

No meta's, wordplay or personals;& putting his name in your verse does not count as a personal.Obviously your a newbie, get better at text will ya.

Justify
Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
Old dated & played
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
Hows a natural disaster confusing?You see a cyclone & you RUN!
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
Blah
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
Filler
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut
Yeah ok... Just

Some played lines & some lines that were straight filler, flow was the only winner of this verse

V/Justify;Wasn't great, but far better then Jacket
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