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Old 07-30-04, 03:45 AM   #15
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2hard2loose
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer//
ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's//
No, flow's terrible
but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin//
im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?//
Blah, filler, still no flow
come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact//
why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.//
WACK!
what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?//
my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?//
Neh, you suck
cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit//
cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date//
alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint//
Haha... bushwack yourself in the head

That verse ^^ yes that one, was utter shit.I know your new, but keep working on all aspects of battling.

Rush
man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose
was tying yo shoe/
my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who
u fin to lose to/
pfft, name flip could of been better
i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on
tha attack/
my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk
yo ass with a bat/
Blah
i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did
that/
i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/
vocabs horrible, 'baby couldnt did that' did you mean 'could of'?
to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had
to tackle/
see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/
cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change
to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/
so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/
Flows retarded, battle/tackle line could of been flipped better.All the lines after it though, sucked dildos

Structures unco, some meta's... but weren't used effectively, the battle/tackle line being a prime example.Up your vocab & your wording

V/Rush;argh you both sucked, but Rush gets my vote.

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