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Old 07-30-04, 06:47 AM   #13
A.M.O.K
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J Roc
i'll easily rip you cause you're weak like one-ply toliet tissue...
and slice you into itty bitty pieces smaller than fish food//
first lines played, fish lines blahza
you couldn't produce a "tight product" if you "multiplied virgins"...
you're just mad at me i'm da one who "pop" your girlfriend//
No
imma leave your head spinnin worse than a tropical whirlwind...
you're full of more shit than da toliet you hurl in//
PlaYeD
to me Monsoon is like a dumb jock...
i know for you "pain sucks" cause you suck on numb cocks//
pFFt
you get rolled on more than airplanes on runways...
like LL said "you can't touch me" on "any given sunday"//
'runway' lines ok, 2nd was ugh
Monsoon-ya-wack, you're gettin pop worse than bubble wrap...
imma leave da spot hotter than a NASA shuttle blast//
Nah
imma slap you so hard you'll forever have crooked teeth...
and if you were my genetic clone you still wouldn't be as good as me//
Hoo Hum
i burn brighter than light Magnified a million times...
it's like your verse is covered in novicane, i just don't feel your rhymes//
pLaYeD
i possess a brillant mind so my attack is thought out thouroughly...
you act like da average bitch so you're just another girl to me//
Yeah your cool
so after i'm done you need to take a step to da sidelines...
and do like you always been doing, just continue to ride mine//
Whut eva

Obviously got some talent, BUT 99% of your verse was pLaYeD or indirect(talking bout his girl?c'mon)

Monsoon
I payed the money hungry nurses, to keep you meditated with drugs
your peeps in the hospital......... givin me kisses and hugs
Umm yeah, I'm sure your havin fun
while you stuck strung out, layin on your belly with your butt out
its that happy shitt you need to cut out, this cats bugged out
fiLLeR
felt ya wrist yea he gone,this ni99az lifeless indeed
hes in the state of mind where he won the fight in his dreams
pLaYed
call it a wrap, cause with this rap, you down for the count
1--5--8 fuk it hes down for this round, fukin wit monsoon youll get slapped wit the crown
rewind: this is what finished this m.c, lets back up to the first round
Umm yeah, the crown...
They say every punch I give it will come back to me
how is that, when im hotter then 2 gay dudes in a sausage factory
Now thats jus homo...

Mostly filler, flow was alright... but no punch to be seen

V/J Roc;it's sad... full of pLaYed lines, yet still wins, how?Cause Monsoon didn't take the opportunity handed & dropped some wack shit.

Follow my links, I wasted time on your verses, now waste some time on mine.
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