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Flyweight
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IP:
Voted For: SONIC
Triple_N
Da truth is u a net thug, obsessed wit made up ebonics
U changed names cuz real mc's cancel u jus like sonic
Cancel him?Soft opener
Ya lines are unshapely, structure doesn't exist
Wouldn't be shapely wit exercise and diet from nutristionist
Yeah thats arlight
U could neva do audio cuz even in text u hit wrong notes
U should drop ya post in a pool cuz there shit floats
... below par
U a nobody all the spits in ya lifetime will be typed
Cuz u flow jus like water in dried out water pipes
uGh.. No
U try to hide that u bite and set yourself apart
U rv jeeper creeper u don't bite whole lines jus certain parts
Not bad
U black wit no rhythm, rappin' u jus need to stop
Cuz cornballs like u take the hip out the hop
.... no
Bein' fisted u luv it always made u chuckle
But i already knew how much sonic liked knuckles
LOL!
A few blahza lines, some good ones, closure was hot
Sonic
I put this bitch on the "front lines" so he can Take First Hits
His Bio says, "Rhymin's my life", Meanin his life Ain't Worth Shit
uGh, barely...
Why does he Try to Win, U get ripped Time n Time Again
I jus Find The Pen, n lyrically kill u with Ink, like Giant Squids
Thats ok
My Verbs Split Ya, Feel the impact when these Words Hit Ya
The Infamous "triple N", a.k.a, The Newbie, Nerd Nigga
ROFL!....umm yeah that was ok
I'll beat U unconcious, With U giving an Extra Effort
U could give me 5 of yo losses n I'd still have a better Record
lol it's OK
How dare yo step up, I'll win, let me Increase the Span
Yo Punches are like UFO's.. No one See's them Land
LOL!
But u claim the be the master?
Well sorry "son", but i'm yo DaD, now you're not a Bastard
Umm whats going on here?
And Like "Fishing" I set Mc's up wit bait, only way to Fight em
Coz when I throw out "good lines", niggas like him Bite em
Yeah it's aight, brag line
Yo rhymes are delayed, punches played, I refuse Yo Demo
Bounce, for I slap U back far enough for u to win Limbo
Alright...
I know ur wonderin where's the scope, why do I Spit So Clean
I'm like Freddy Crougars, U can't beat me In Yo Dreams
No
So next time don't try you'll be sure to Die in Pain
Wit my addictive, good battle, yet like drugs, u Tried "in Vain"
Did I read this wrong, or was that written poorly?
Consistent verse fell off near the end, flipped some old concepts (punches/land etc) & had good flow
V/Sonic;Reading the laugho-meter he takes it.If Triple N had match his lines... this would of been different(?)Good read anyway guys
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