Voted For: raw killa
some strong punches i dint see any personals,ya flow was a bit choppy but i could still follow it,you had better vocab but i think ya gotta try n shortin ya lines a bit i think it'll make them more effective..nice verse..aight verse 2 i liked ya opener,way ta bring the new system in ta play with that decline line,but you had simple vocab n i did'nt perticularly think dissin his crew helped ya verse until the last line n i was'nt even feelin that line..so half your verse was really wasted cause you werent battlin killa ya were takin shots at his crew...although i liked the raw kill/bam line you moved 2 far off topic talkin bought his crew...im sure most vets would agree with me that it hurt your verse more than helped it...sorry dawg....good battle
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