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Flyweight
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IP:
Voted For: Da Vinci
I.E
Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab
and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad"
Period lines r played
ya punches be sad, i see why u stressin
ya like "shaq jumpin", about to "fall" off the battle in "2 seconds"
OK idea, would of had more impact if worded better
da vinci a battler?, so I heard but hes verse looks are deceiving
Got tons of guns?, but ya best shot at a punch is aiming at ya ceiling
Flows off, bars blah
ya best bet is to quit now and train with me
cuz play'in in the "WNBA", only time u had a "bitch with D" (bra size D )
Nah, worded horribly
Fuck Telling’ me how ur ill, an how ya talent is wicked
the height of ur career is legal grounds for midget's
Yeah it's ok, once again your wording hurting your punches
I’v realized ya not as nice as you say
I searched ya 4 ya ill shit, and woundup wit less ‘writes’ then a slave BITCH
Oooo, pretty good if not a tad stretched
BANG BANG EARLY....
Not too early now
my rhymes is blessed with raw, game- let's take a pause
my punchlines "add hand to mouth", like im "test'in ya jaw"
'add hand to mouth... is like testin ya jaw'... nope don't get it
Alot of good ideas in your lines, take a little more time wording them better & you should hav meteor like impact w/ your punches.Flow was on & off
Da Vinci
Want to Intesify your verse keep it under a microscope,
Only thing it effects is your Loss column,’n’ even that’s a joke
Umm can't see his loss column sadly, this new system fucked that punch up
I.E try’n to set an example of how lose a battle quickly
Put em in so many pieces, leave his alias as humpty dumpty
LOL...
I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse
(till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.)
Clever, lol
See your old enough* to know better so really what’s your excuse
I could write this verse in white-out, a win, ya still couldn’t execute
Ok
Cause your in over your head like your coming out the womb
Take your wack shit to U.F, cause here we got no room,
It's ok
Doesn’t take C.S.I to find why this battle’ll leave yea dead
This verse is keen ta target ya self esteem, leave ya on ya death bed
Soft closure
Obviously got some skill, punches were consistent, the last bar being the only one I wasn't feeling.Flow was off
V/Da Vinci;Better verse overall.
Now follow my links, yes you know you want to.
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