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Old 08-01-04, 07:49 PM   #11
FLooZe
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I thought it was decent.mjust,your verse was average.your structure was ok but you shouldve left some of your lines out.The other guy was straight ass.The hook was gay as fuck,and D-dimes shouldnt have been on there.Repetitive at parts,just talking about guns and blah.You bois need to elevate a bit more then make something half decent.5/10.
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