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Old 08-02-04, 04:08 PM   #8
FLooZe
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This was feedback posted for DustyBlunted

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Since Im in your crew I cant vote so Ill leave you sum feedback.You had the right idea to put a bunch of multies in your verse,firt of all,it adds to your verse.But the thing is,you had too much "self ups" in youe verse,meaning you were talking about how evil and gangstaish you are.In battles,focus more on personals dissing your opponent on contents in their profiles and their names and stuff.I liked your line where you talked about real thugs not battling on the internet,that was well thought out.Your structure was pretty average,but your flow was kinda rough at parts.Just keep on battling and elevate,you'll get there.Average drop overall,focus more on the opponent.
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