yo, was the lyrics tight? i mean i wasnt really worried about the structure. it was just a mix of a bunch of stuff ive written.just tryna get some feedback on this.i'm still kinda young(13) so im tryna improve. i was speakin true shit tho. i aint fakin what im sayin.

if im busy i sick my soldier ricky/
my soldier ricky is sick/
Ricky Syx/
sendin six from the six sixes your way/
there gon be sixty-six shots that make sixty six
bodies drop today/

is that some good wordplay?