its alright kinda reminds me of my style without all the punches though..lol..was this freestyled or written...it kinda looks written,but honestly you were just makin statements so its kinda hard ta critique if ya get what im sayin...this was more like an intro 4 ya crew..your vocab could be a bit better n your flow more consistent,overall i thought it was good though...check these out...
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me vs 650
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