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Old 08-04-04, 01:20 PM   #13
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Voted For: GEE

GEE

Spektikul is skeptikal, for tryin ta make himself respectable,
Forget-it-fool, youre like 50, or a biter, cuz you neglect the "Rule."*
--I thought this was funny, nice play on words 8/10
Canada huh? Must play "hockey" a lot, cuz your "ice" cold "rhymes" I've come to roast,
his goalie is outside lookin to kill him..I guess this bitch sucks at both.
--stretched lines, but decent punch 7/10
This fakeass constantly bites off vets, he be "rake'in in lines".
so I'll "smash this bitch ta liquid", like I was "make'in him wine"**.
--Another good one, made me laugh, nice play on words 8/10
Pelt him with lyrical bullets, his rhymes come at me cheap like fake kicks,
"shots" of punches make him lean back like Keanu Reeves in the Matrix,
--Another decent punch, but coulda been better 7/10
Your rhymes are like "water" cuz everybody sees through them..youre done,
cuz my "flow" will leave "marks" on you, like cars left out ta dry in the sun.
--Another nice play on words and an ok punch 7/10

Total: 37/50

Spektikul

I'ma Spektikul, Electrical, a technical fannatic,
How the fuck you gunna beat me, Ima sparratic rap addict,
--Weak ass opener, self glorification 4/10
Ive had it with these bitches, Sayin that they'll leave me dead,
Use your head Gee, You make my I.Q. drop just from being in ya thread,
--An ok attempt at a punch 6/10
See I got catz to back me, like red bull and pyrokronics,
You sound retarded when you started a crew from hooked on phonics,
--Wack attempt at a punch 5/10
Now its time for me to show you, who the real fuckin boss is,
Hes scared to show his record, cause there ain't nothin there, but losses,
--How do you know if there all losses? this one wont be 6/10
I hate to say you lost, but I'll ensure I never lie,
You forgot to letters in your name, so heres the "A" and "Y".
--The gay shit is over played, but attempted a personal 6/10

Overall:27/50

Vote:Gee
Reason:Coming with harder punches and nice wordplay
Spekitkul:Elevate, work on harder punches, use wordplay and multis..you had a nice structure and flow, but nothing else
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