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Check in by: 08-04-04 at 03:46 AM

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Win removed by G's request

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 03:28 AM.

GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 03:35 AM.

I'ma Spektikul, Electrical, a technical fannatic,
How the fuck you gunna beat me, Ima sparratic rap addict,
Ive had it with these bitches, Sayin that they'll leave me dead,
Use your head Gee, You make my I.Q. drop just from being in ya thread,
See I got catz to back me, like red bull and pyrokronics,
You sound retarded when you started a crew from hooked on phonics,
Now its time for me to show you, who the real fuckin boss is,
Hes scared to show his record, cause there ain't nothin there, but losses,
I hate to say you lost, but I'll ensure I never lie,
You forgot to letters in your name, so heres the "A" and "Y".

YO, gl holmes....

Spektikul is skeptikal, for tryin ta make himself respectable,
Forget-it-fool, youre like 50, or a biter, cuz you neglect the "Rule."*
Canada huh? Must play "hockey" a lot, cuz your "ice" cold "rhymes" I've come to roast,
his goalie is outside lookin to kill him..I guess this bitch sucks at both.
This fakeass constantly bites off vets, he be "rake'in in lines".
so I'll "smash this bitch ta liquid", like I was "make'in him wine"**.
Pelt him with lyrical bullets, his rhymes come at me cheap like fake kicks,
"shots" of punches make him lean back like Keanu Reeves in the Matrix,
Your rhymes are like "water" cuz everybody sees through them..youre done,
cuz my "flow" will leave "marks" on you, like cars left out ta dry in the sun.

*Biters neglect the 'rules'. As does 50 neglect Ja 'Rule'.
**You step or 'smash' grapes, then they turn ta liquid and wine.
-Look at tha avatar and shit, you'll get it.

Good shit Spektikal. Good Battle.

-Up.

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yo nice verse man...uppin 1 on this, lets get some votes ppl...

Voted For: GEE

overall gee had the stonger punches in this battle,good opener nice wordplay,n kept your punches consistent throughout your verse..spectikal your punches were 2 straight forward not enough complexity in your verse,your had 2 nice punches but the rest of your verse along with your opener jus did'nt cut it...
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left...2 many herbs

Voted For: GEE

Spektikul- Your Verse Flowed Good But You Didnt Have Any Hard Punches, Structure Was Good Tho

Gee- You Had Punches And Wordplay, Spek Didnt Throw Any Hard Punches

Punches- Gee
Flow- Spek
Wordplay- Gee
Metaphor- Gee
Structure- Spek
Originality- Tie

Final Vote Gee

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Yo thanks for the input thus far everyone...lets get some more hounest votes happening plz...

Voted For: Spektikul

Punches: Spek
Multi:GEE
Wordplay:GEE
Personals:Spek
Opener:Gee
Closer: Spek
Flow: Spek
Rhyems:Tied
Orginality: Spek
Structure:Spek

Best Lines:

Spek
Ive had it with these bitches, Sayin that they'll leave me dead,
Use your head Gee, You make my I.Q. drop just from being in ya thread

GEE

This fakeass constantly bites off vets, he be "rake'in in lines".
so I'll "smash this bitch ta liquid", like I was "make'in him wine"**.


ConClusion:

aight this was a tight battle i liked both of ya'll verses, tight shit, but i think Spek came harder in in a couple crucial areas, like orginality and personals, thats what did it for me... So my vote goes to:

VOTE: Spektikul

No hate Guys, Good Battle

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Aight this was a really tight battle, good job guys, i liked both ya'll verses, personally i think Spek came harder in alot of Crucial areas, like Orginality, and Personals,

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Voted For: GEE

Honestly I think you both need to step your game up. Spektikul, you're multis were a lot better, but most of the time battles are won by punches, and Gee just had more, although they weren't all that great. I liked that Matrix line though...

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Voted For: GEE

GEE

Spektikul is skeptikal, for tryin ta make himself respectable,
Forget-it-fool, youre like 50, or a biter, cuz you neglect the "Rule."*
--I thought this was funny, nice play on words 8/10
Canada huh? Must play "hockey" a lot, cuz your "ice" cold "rhymes" I've come to roast,
his goalie is outside lookin to kill him..I guess this bitch sucks at both.
--stretched lines, but decent punch 7/10
This fakeass constantly bites off vets, he be "rake'in in lines".
so I'll "smash this bitch ta liquid", like I was "make'in him wine"**.
--Another good one, made me laugh, nice play on words 8/10
Pelt him with lyrical bullets, his rhymes come at me cheap like fake kicks,
"shots" of punches make him lean back like Keanu Reeves in the Matrix,
--Another decent punch, but coulda been better 7/10
Your rhymes are like "water" cuz everybody sees through them..youre done,
cuz my "flow" will leave "marks" on you, like cars left out ta dry in the sun.
--Another nice play on words and an ok punch 7/10

Total: 37/50

Spektikul

I'ma Spektikul, Electrical, a technical fannatic,
How the fuck you gunna beat me, Ima sparratic rap addict,
--Weak ass opener, self glorification 4/10
Ive had it with these bitches, Sayin that they'll leave me dead,
Use your head Gee, You make my I.Q. drop just from being in ya thread,
--An ok attempt at a punch 6/10
See I got catz to back me, like red bull and pyrokronics,
You sound retarded when you started a crew from hooked on phonics,
--Wack attempt at a punch 5/10
Now its time for me to show you, who the real fuckin boss is,
Hes scared to show his record, cause there ain't nothin there, but losses,
--How do you know if there all losses? this one wont be 6/10
I hate to say you lost, but I'll ensure I never lie,
You forgot to letters in your name, so heres the "A" and "Y".
--The gay shit is over played, but attempted a personal 6/10

Overall:27/50

Vote:Gee
Reason:Coming with harder punches and nice wordplay
Spekitkul:Elevate, work on harder punches, use wordplay and multis..you had a nice structure and flow, but nothing else

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