Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

ouch,hands down the kid took this,damn you even got me ta laugh in a couple lines..good job nice n personal..punches were pretty straight but that don't matter if they connect...phat your verse barely rymed...heres a hint...top n bottom line should have rymin words fall in the same area..

ex...ayo kid i can't believe how many battles you've lost,
go ta bed,n relieve yourself of those baby rattle at any cost,
^^not much meaning but you get the point^^
this stuff is explained in detail in the tutorials....

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