Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-04 at 02:18 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:22 PM.

Phat will eat ya leg, fool you squeezing ya balls
saying give me a peck, you spit like a chicken,
every time you open ur pussy, you gotta dick in,
Yo hill biley, every time you try 3style me you get lippy,
You’re a gay fag, you strip for a g, im a leave,
ill crack ya head Like an Easter egg,
my fist is about to go straight threw your head,
I created death just take ya last breath while you still here,
Times up ova bang ill shoot to ya head till ya dead you better go giv head Hoe im leaving ya while I take ya fleshed bones
nigga your fucking growing breats bigga then your mums chest
im dogeing bullets wereing a bullet proof vest
im gonna drown you in holy water time to get blessed

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 12:01 PM.

Challenged me secretly, hopin' I'd miss check-in/
But I beat it by 2 hours, bitch let's begin/
Spit your whack rhymes, we'll see who fuckin' gets the win/
'Cuz I'm a man, you're a bitch with you estrogen/
That's why you stay loyal while she always out creepin'/
Like daytime cell phone hours I got your girl peakin'/
Spittin' this frequent, every weekend/
I can catch you while you sleepin' and give you the Nicholas Berg treatment/
Speakin' wreckless, you fake, you playin' it up/
Sneezin's the only time you ever be sprayin' shit up/
Hater get up, get ya dress on, get ya teflon/
You softer than a pillow, and that's why you gettin' slept on/
So wake up, step ya game up 'fore I shake ya frame up/
Styles switch and change up, used your weight problem to make your name up/
You pussy, but like that of a virgin I'm real tight/
Don't try to get no dickrides on the vote 'cuz you can't get none in real life/

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

This Was a tight battle, for the skill level you guys are at, you both lacked hard punches, personals, and didnt have any wordplay this is how i broke it down:

Opener: The Kid
Closer: The Kid
Flow: The Kid
Structure: Phat
Orginality:The Kid
Rhyems:The Kid
Multi:N/a
Personals: N/a
Punches: The Kid

Vote: The Kid...

Keep Elevating Guys...

Return the Fav:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139459

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

aight good battle...pdizzle came harder and had alot more hits...his had flow too...multies...word use...was aight...so my vote goes to pdizzle...phatinum...u gotta elevate...much luv...

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

ouch,hands down the kid took this,damn you even got me ta laugh in a couple lines..good job nice n personal..punches were pretty straight but that don't matter if they connect...phat your verse barely rymed...heres a hint...top n bottom line should have rymin words fall in the same area..

ex...ayo kid i can't believe how many battles you've lost,
go ta bed,n relieve yourself of those baby rattle at any cost,
^^not much meaning but you get the point^^
this stuff is explained in detail in the tutorials....

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return the favour n vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167
topical:200 posts
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137724
me vs 650

Thanks a lot for the votes y'all. We're still uppin', so don't be shy people.

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Still uppin', come on folks, let's close this one down.

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

WORDPLAY - KID
PUNCHES - KID
STUCTURE - TIE
PERSONALS - NONE HIT
OVERALL - KID

YOU JUST HAD A STRONGER VERSE WITH BETTER WORDPLAY AND PUNCHLINES.. PHATINUM'S LINES WERE KINDA BASIC AT TIMES AND HIS PUNC LINES WEREN'T HITTIN.. THE OPPOSITE WITH YOU SO YOU GET MY VOTE..

RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY THREAD WILL U PLEASE? THANX
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140340