Had to look up Kismet. dayum girl your vocab is deep. The imagery in this was straight sick. You obviously know what your picturing and how to describe it. I had something along the same lines as this I was working on, but was wondering how a religious type poem would be recieved so I hadnt even finished it yet. I think I will though and post it to see what ya'll think. You got serious skills writing girl - although I'm still trying to catch the style, you got more talent than any cat on this site easy.

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