Voted For: pictureperfect2

My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect..
Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet..
I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck..
The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"...
This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect...
With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments..
On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence...
So hold the derogatory comments....

Dusty-Not breaking it down line by line..your verse was full of multis...but no punches...sorry but multis dont win battles, punches do

pictureperfect2-It had a good structure which helped with the flow of it..you may not have had multis or wordplay, but you did less self glorifyin, and more throwin punches, and you get my vote for that

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