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I like the overall theme of the poem. I liked that you touched on 2 paths one as you delve into hell, the other being showed a righteous path by God. The dream concept was dope. But I really liked that you showed their are only 2 paths in life -- Good And Bad! I liked it! The structure was not easy on the eyes and to read but it was dope!
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