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Old 08-05-04, 08:57 PM   #4
DustyBlunted
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JaneDoe,a name usually given to a unidentified dead prostitute
Better off deceased before another innocent male you pollute
Your whole rhyme scheme soft like a rotten piece of fruit….
I constitute that your whole verse will lack a “punch”..
By the end of my post I’ll have your soiled panties in a bunch…
I gotta hunch that your rhymes are un-original..
And have a lack of flow
You must be wack..I thought I’d let you know ..
CommonSence is the only tight shit to ever come outta Chicago…
Should’ve stayed a no-show, and stayed the fuck outta my direction
You so ugly you couldn’t give a blind guy an erection…
No recollection why your ass can fit a fist?
You stuck your dads arm up it after he seen your face and slit is wrists..
Don’t get pissed its all in the art of war…
Its not my fault your pubic area is infested with crabs and several soars.