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drop verse by 12:30 A.M
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Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 08-05-04 at 08:23 PM

Must drop verse in 330 minutes after check in.

JaneDoe has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 07:54 PM.

DustyBlunted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 07:56 PM.

JaneDoe,a name usually given to a unidentified dead prostitute
Better off deceased before another innocent male you pollute
Your whole rhyme scheme soft like a rotten piece of fruit….
I constitute that your whole verse will lack a “punch”..
By the end of my post I’ll have your soiled panties in a bunch…
I gotta hunch that your rhymes are un-original..
And have a lack of flow
You must be wack..I thought I’d let you know ..
CommonSence is the only tight shit to ever come outta Chicago…
Should’ve stayed a no-show, and stayed the fuck outta my direction
You so ugly you couldn’t give a blind guy an erection…
No recollection why your ass can fit a fist?
You stuck your dads arm up it after he seen your face and slit is wrists..
Don’t get pissed its all in the art of war…
Its not my fault your pubic area is infested with crabs and several soars.

you aint on the level of kissin my ass so you kissin my brass
messed with the wrong people now you got your vision on the glass
put you in a pauper's burial like george moran
treat you like a foreign and have you on the corner whorin
so follow the leader I'm the punisher so know the ledge
i left you incomplete like sonic without the hedge
you a nobody. i murder you, you stay there for years
people glad to see you gone they even forgot to shed tears
this bastards a wimp. I'd feed him to my shrimp
he the rabbit I'm the python. i dont even gotta attempt
you burn the mic when you spit i burn the whole place up
one difference between me + you is that you burn when you fuck
another difference about us is you make headlines i make history
you might underrate me but i make sure your death is a mystery

told you its been almost a year

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

uppin. this battle just got reopened so vote. please. thank you

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

VOTE!

VOTE!

VOTE!

uppin.

thank you

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

Voted For: JaneDoe

dusty no punches at all really and your disses aint hit your flow is good and vocab is ok.jane good ender ok punches good flow and better vocab then dusty overall your verse was stronger

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uppin
vote
vote
vote
vote on this battle
come on

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

uppin.
im upiin this battle
so vote!
thank you

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

u.........p........p........i.........n

vote on this battle!

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

vote!
if you dont vote.... something terrible is going to happen. j/k.
please vote

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

vote on this battle! vote!
vote!
vote!
vote or die!

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

Voted For: DustyBlunted

yo yal both did yallt hign i liked botth of ur verses shit if it ws up to me it wud b a tie rite down da iddle but it gota b a losa shit i hate it but sry, um i liked Jane's verse ut dusty had betta flo and punches and i liked the fact that both yall had yo perosnals n evrythin but i gota sya my vote goes to dusty

v/dustybluntd, no hate!!!!! good battle yall

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