Voted For: Scriptive

Afropimp-Okay I know you're new to RV....but come on man...im not even goin into your punches or anything deeper than your structure...you wrote in a paragraph...write bars....like everyone else on RV does...

Scriptive-decent structure with a nice flow, some played concepts...not many good punches but there was a few...you get this for actually having a structure

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