Voted For: Tha Q

young duke:

nice verse in general... except ya could have worded it a lot better... and i wasnt really feelin ya flow... it was off the first few bars, but ya picked it up about halfway trhough... plot was ill though...

Tha Q:

nice flow and plot. ya verse was kind of.. easier to read that dukes... his was sort of jumpy-ish.. but ya flow really helped the topic... one bad thing though, having the ending as a dream is hella weak... its like... you built up to this madd climax and then the whole thing didnt even happen... ya coulda had him not have the guts, n get burned, jump off n get injured.. or hell... even survive... but anythin would have been better than the dream ending... good shit though... keep it up

v/ Tha Q

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