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Old 08-08-04, 04:37 PM   #8
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE

1st verse was good but veered off in the middle of the verse,i liked your idea's n opener/closer..tight shit...but you dint keep on track well enough...atmos:decent verse nothing 2 special although you stated on topic n hit some koo..lines.i would've liked ta see you both narrow it down ta explaining 1 day in stead of all them in1 ..i thnk it would've made for a better read...both good but i was jus feeling this 1 more..
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