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IP:
Voted For: Grimez City
best lines throught the battle: nice topic..
but in the hood old heads is so sure of they self,talken up in the barber shops/
my conect said take the bus now im forced up on the charcter sell da rocks/
^ really visual.. nice use of words.. i think u won Grimez becuz, u had good imagery, ya structure was a lil' off which i give to atmosphere, but as far as the topic goes.. u stuck to it well..
ATMOSPHERE's best lines happened to be..
If I could have 1 wish, I'd be arrested in the mornin before seven....
Cuz compared to here, jail for-a-day is really more like heaven..
^ nice visual but throughout i give it to Grimez City..
keep up the work and pee my battles y'all..
so Grimez u got this one! holla
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