Voted For: SONIC

Fuck you first and foremost....
but u took this...you had some good lines, and some weak shit, but marv had 3 bars of filler in a 5 bar verse...which made it weak...i liked lines like the vietnam shit, and the work at a music store one...
The structure was good, flow had some flaws but overall good...so u get the vote...

can u guys plz return the favor....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...478963&posted=1

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