Thread: BrOTheRP.A.R.A. vs MagiC
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Old 08-09-04, 07:46 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
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brother, was a fairly simple verse in itself. lacked vocabulary, or made sense, from my understanding it's a topical battle or something similar, about dream. either way i didn't like this one. didn't capture or captivate me at all.