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Old 08-09-04, 11:15 PM   #16
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE

atmo...
woah..nice verse u really impressed me with that...very good imagrey...very good flow..good all around lyrics...just all around good verse..no realy forced rhymes..
stayed on subject..evrything fit like a puzzle peice...

grimz
wack structure....fix that asap..bad flow..bad lyrics...forced and stretched lines..all around gay..for real though..gay....just keeep workin and im confident
youll get this rap-thing down..lol...sorry i gotta vote for atmo
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