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Old 08-10-04, 08:43 PM   #33
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
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I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off-
Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all-
4/10
I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind-
Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme-
4/10
You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open-
Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'-
4/10
U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best-
Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep-
4/10
I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten-
But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin-
8/10*Ya Hottest Punch*


N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"...
Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb...
6/10
Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt...
The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...*
7/10
Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought...
You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out...
6/10
Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning...
If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...**
6/10
You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches...
You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...***
6/10
Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"...
Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite...
7/10

overalll this wasent the best battle but it came down 2 better wordplay
and who had the overall harder punch and better structure

Sight overall 50/100
Dred overall 70/100
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