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Old 08-11-04, 06:47 AM   #19
raw killa
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
 
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Voted For: EmerginMc07

"and its a drag that i really have to waste such lines and valuable time,when hotness compared you couldnt even heat an iron//
it seems to me you took me as joke and carried me lightly,
but by now i can tell your curled up in a corner saying "I'm frightened//"-damage control

yo u didnt rhyme in those lines...lmmao

i give this vote 2 emerginmc cuz he had more punches n multi's plus he actually rhymed all the way through his rhyme
structure n flow was equal on both verses but u gotta work on voab n make surre ur bars r rhymin
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