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Old 08-11-04, 05:38 PM   #21
M&rk
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Voted For: Damage Control

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138937
YO FUCKIN RETURN WIT AN HONEST VOTE.

call me a teacher cause im givin this kid a lesson,
while his lines are like play-doh it'll be easy for me to stretch em//
somebody better bless em, cause his defeat will come with ease, and the only way you'll ever get "a head" is down on your rusty knees//
^^^^yo these two bars win the battle, this is how its done. wordplay used as punches shows that your good. only thing better is doin that wit personals and since emergingmc didnt do that i gotta give it to damage control. but yo dc, u gotta make them hit harder by makin them personals.

both of u need to get ya strutures strait. dc yas was ite, but a few of ya lines was stretchd and mc all ya lines was stretched.
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