| atlas the vagabond | IP: 
 
 Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
 nice nice, here it is.
 
 vicious beast-lacked seriousness, the izzle abuse really kilt this for you, and knowledge of character names on magic school bus? wow that really kilt it, i was like, "How corny is this guy."  that was your downfall, was the corniness of your verse.  But i respect the personal on his name.  That was a good effort.  Just a very corny verse.
 
 And p dizzle-nice verse, great use of multi's, and nice flowing structure, a good read from start to finish.  Moderate punchlines, but i think we both know it doesn't take much for this guy.  I liked your verse, you had superior flow, structure, content, so i gave you this one.
 
 hit me back with an honest vote on my battle.
 
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