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Old 08-14-04, 11:34 AM   #8
KISI
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

nice nice, here it is.

vicious beast-lacked seriousness, the izzle abuse really kilt this for you, and knowledge of character names on magic school bus? wow that really kilt it, i was like, "How corny is this guy." that was your downfall, was the corniness of your verse. But i respect the personal on his name. That was a good effort. Just a very corny verse.

And p dizzle-nice verse, great use of multi's, and nice flowing structure, a good read from start to finish. Moderate punchlines, but i think we both know it doesn't take much for this guy. I liked your verse, you had superior flow, structure, content, so i gave you this one.

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