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Old 08-14-04, 01:58 PM   #33
M&rk
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Voted For: SONIC

marv- honestly i did not feel a single one of your punches, and half the shit u said wasn't even a punch like......
yea u know marvolousjay1009 dat dude dat use ebonic's-
dont rap own apart. in "seattle" u should be a "super-sonic"-
.......and u had gay ass metaphors like that barney line, and that other "handle the truth" punch about his girl...... all shit about someones girl is played.
......and prolly why he sonic is because mentioning shit about it is gay.....like
yeah dunny i a few keep guns so if i go da cali aim n pop it-
"sonic" ya punk ass gon need a "doctor" & it aint "robotnick"-

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U Take lyrical shots but when I shoot You can't Dodge da 9
Sonic Came to steal yo Eyes right from yo sockets, Rob u Blind
.....nice wordplay, but not a punch, turn it into one or don't use it.
I Abuse u More, Yo rhymes are more Irritatin than Pubic Sores
So The only way U'll Sell a CD is if u worked in a Music Store
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U'r the Nerd Type, U'll choke off the smoke when I Burn da Mic
U'r like a Kid born with Hand Arthritis, u never Learned to Write
^^^^nice witty punches like them, i gotta give ya the battle

hit my battle up agianst e-dubs on elevated, LINKS IN MY SIG
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