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Old 08-15-04, 02:13 PM   #11
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what?!!!

Yo u might think im whack but most likely im the best
UZI? I Shake Salt on My Bulletz so they melt in ya Chest

wack opener... what's salty bullets got to do with an uzi?...no connection

well dogg u Say u all dat but i got haters on hand
And i got no Respect for u cuz u pretending to be a man

garbage filler line... shoulda deleted it

Well i fuck u for real and get ya ass real Woozy
And Shit dogg i Spray Faster then ur ""

Gay closer?... wtf dude! no metas, multi's, wordplay, punches, or personals

Stonez?Dis bitch gonna get stoned by my lyrical flowz,
Da only thing "Phat" about him is his stomach rolls

ehh... not feeling the opener

,Runnin down backstreets-treated like a athlete-
marathon-
Fuck tha cemetary that dis nigga gets buried on,

ehh again... no punch

I leave u smoked like a crackhead on a mission,
Dis pussy challengin me, My rhymez alone will force him in2 submission,

shoulda came with a better second line... ok i guess... no real punch ..mission/submission...blah

Settin new rules fo' rappin-Its gonna b yo' face im slappin,
Even if i popped a cap in yo mouth Bullshit b dribblin out even though yo lip flappin,

stretched line... little multi usage... no concept of conceptuality..get a clue... little bit of a punch though..well, love tap

So shut tha fuck up coz theres nobody clappin

and this line goes with ....what?

boring battle but uzi had a slightly better verse...
check the merkings in my sig...lol...one of 'em is mine...lol
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