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Old 08-17-04, 05:10 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by Phantom
im not gunna vote cauz i couldnt stand either verse. meta4 ur structure was whack man you seriously need to work on it and your vocab too. flow wasnt that good either. ice pick, we already had a discussion bout battlin people on your level so take my advice next time. your verse wasnt totally whack but u tryin to up ur vocab left some lines not making any sense. examples:'Meta, you'll be more shook than gravity;'
(gravity DOESNT shake) and 'i petrify my knowledge like roman pillars.' (why would u do that? petrify makes shit hard and old!) anyways i changed my mind i will vote and its goin to ice pick for overall better flow.


agree ^
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