nice verses all around

structure:ie
flow:ie
vocab:troop
punches:ie
persies:troop

ie took this one, because his flowed better. Troop was over on ie on vocab, i liked his punches, but he just had problems in flow and rhyming, on the last two lines, those don't rhyme.

ie's closer was nice, the beginning was stretched.
but close battle though

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