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IP:
Voted For: intensify effect
Maku JaiiLin
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is good.. no multis.. wordplay is a little simple.. no punch..
intensity effect
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. ur second line is stretched.. no multis.. wordplay is ok.. punch connected a little..
Overall
Maku JaiiLin had the better structure.. both had ok wordplay.. neither had multis.. intensity effect's punch connected a little more.. and basing off that this is a punchline battle.. intensity effect gets my vote for at least havin a punch..
VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECT
Please return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. Thanx..
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