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Old 08-20-04, 06:33 PM   #7
fluidmoon
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

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auto: nice verse, i liked your flow and your punches were strong here, you had good wordplay and some nice personals, liked your opener and your closing lines as well, you hit hard
j dot: i liked your verse as well, but i dont think your punches hit as hard as auto's, but overall good job....
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