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Old 08-21-04, 06:03 PM   #30
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Im battlin a newbee cat bout kustomize ur image
Im run yo ass like Marion Shirley does tha 100 yard scrimmage*
--ok opener, no real punch

no one expects u to win// u couldnt block this verse if ur cpu was on pimp defend
we all no u aint hard but u could at least pretend// to cotend
--stretched, simple, no real punch

with tha lyrical controvery i spit// like a pearled blunt my shit hits**
--ehhhh,no!

this mite blow ur mind// like smokin dro all da time
--no again

my flow carries a certain type of complexity// tha shit that ends ur lifes expectancy
--ya killing me.. no punches at all

u couldnt be hot if u were strung on extacy***
get on my level & u still couldnt be next 2 me
u must not no im tha best there be
--terrible closer, no punch, no personals,no metas, very limited multi's w/bad usage... structure was completely flawed

3/10



Afro couldnt see Kustum Im@ge...|if he painted a picture, so ths bitch is finished...| becuz ur not getting a vote in this match like a presidental scrimmage...| 1
--weak punch, but good setup line... plus it sounded too similar to the other dude's line

My flow is vintage/\...| K.I. is like a bail enforcer the way i cutting short ya sentence...| i'll leave pimp not gainin a yard like good defences...| my punches leave him more distorted than tornado touched fences....| 2
---this was going real good until the last line

Im confussing him quick...|my verse leave ya scratchin ya head like a pube on ya dick...| you couldn't controll ''Image'' if u was abusin tha click...| 3 [t.v remote. think about it.]
--again, good until the punch was thrown(last line)...we woulda never thought about a remote control if ya hadn't said something... make ya punches connect


Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men...| 4 [cum]
---ya setups are good but once again ya end ya lines with a weak punch...not to mention it was played

~finisher~

my punches leave this pimp with more black eyes than peas on elephunk...|ur whack so dont post ya verse b/c it wont phase me chump...|b/c ya lines more played than all-star mcgrady dunks...| 5
---Weak closer, ok structure throughout, work on punches, where's ya personals, overall better verse

5/10

both you guys still need to elevate but KI has got a lot more potential... i see him getting good real soon if he takes the advice of everyone that drops him some feedback
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