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Old 08-22-04, 05:36 PM   #7
eph
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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

infalliable:

on every bar your first line had good wording an all, but the secnond line killed it, like it was just a filler, a forced rhyme the whole time. horrible, you should have ended every line with a harder punch, if you elevate your rhymes will be much more exciting to read. word.

even though you still won, b/c eps shit was herbish...didnt make sense..

vote: infalliable

return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...02&page=3&pp=15
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