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Check in by: 08-22-04 at 05:32 PM

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INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 05:11 PM.

Eps has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 05:20 PM.

slit gut, throat chokin yea you know it,
i enhance the progress,whatchyou got to show it,
no flowin, no growin, niggas a seed a little herb, nigga ill smoke you up, throw you out like 3 and 1/3r'd//

AIGHT NUF MESSIN AROUND, THE REAL SHIT RITE HERE

ma patience is low, showin this bitch nigga how this shit go,
i got the freestyle, i got the flow,//

words processin, a million a minute,
flattin you out, this niggas diminished,//

you cant spit shit ya raps are impotent,
and like you, your raps arent impotant,//(important)

im an outrage, ill gut you straight to your core,
ill stomp you so hard, ill put you and my foot through the floor,//

simplistical shit, ripped paper, from the tip of your pencil,
i rip you to peices, like you witchya writing utencil,//

aight yo you up make it good dog hit this shit up then we need votes....

This cats bars are gassed up, like a Texaco
This ain't no rap battle cuz, this is a "text-a-ho"

I don't kno where u come from with this shit that u spittin
must b straight from class cuz, I can see ur shits written

my punches connect 2 ya ass, like an infered beem
and hit hard enough 2 make even U do the gangsta lean

don't kno y I accepted this battle, cause u ain't on my level
my bars'll hit u so hard look like u got hit wit a shovel

I'll end this shit here, cause u ain't spittin no deeper
and when ppl read this shit, u'll get picked up by the "RhmyeReaper"

not my best shit but whatever I just got home from gettin fucked up last night and ain't even in the right mind state 4 this shit...o well holla -1-

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

infalliable:

on every bar your first line had good wording an all, but the secnond line killed it, like it was just a filler, a forced rhyme the whole time. horrible, you should have ended every line with a harder punch, if you elevate your rhymes will be much more exciting to read. word.

even though you still won, b/c eps shit was herbish...didnt make sense..

vote: infalliable

return the favor.

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quote your own damn lyrics...

jus ta let you know its not writtin none of ma shits writtin, i wanted it to have more of a rap flow feel then a regular freestyle, some people feel it more some dont but w/es good

Voted For: Eps

both flows were kinda weak
give it 2 EPS his was a lil better cuz at
da end INFALLIBLE's flow fell off it didn't
even rhyme u coulda came way harder den
dat both nice flows dough
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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

good battle. difficult to call but Infallible gets my vote. I just liked the punches better and it flowed nicely. Eps' verse was nice aswell but lacked creativity. Overall both verses were nice but i choose Infallible

Please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle with Word Processor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304

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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

Infallible takes this one. Harder punches in his verse. He also had good substance in his lines compared to Eps's verse. No personals really...some alright metas in both. Infallible takes this with more substance and harder punches in his verse.

Vote-Infallible

Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144250

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uppin 4 votes so I can close this battle out

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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS
PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

fuck man he took this pretty easily on his first bar...although that texaco play off is a little played...it was a pretty good spin...not bad....

return the favor...
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Voted For: Eps

ok eps ok punches worded wrong good disses but worded wrong again streched flow and structure good vocab impotent and impoant dont rhyme ok verse overall 3/10
infalliable good opener good ok ender punches were not that strong nor were your disses it was more self glorification here flow and structure were the same 2/10

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