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The Topical Juggernaut
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more internal rhymes woulda helped, structure was not bad. I dont like your style but flowed ok I guess. maybe its just me but im not a big fan of all the "we-be" aa/bb rhymes on this board, so-to-say. maybe thats why I harly come here. nice peice.
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Crhyme Sindicate
The unexamined life is not worth living.
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