atlas the vagabond
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
good battle props to both. but here's the verdict.
shakes-you have flow and multi's down, but the problem is your content and phrases. They sound elementary.
"u tuck ya nuts and cluck, you lil buttfuck."
that sounds unbeleivably 5th grade, and this really takes away the intensity of your verse. You can't be on some childish shit when you battle son. You gotta put your game face on.
K.I.-good structure and presentation, and flow. but a true lack of hard punches on this one. but you come with an entertaining style though, which is key, and you came harder than your opponent did on this one so i'll give you the 'W'
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