Very deep peice, its good when people actually seem to be able to understand the topics their writing about. So many kids wanna talk about deep subjects but end up screwing around and having no actual feeling in their work. Whereas you were able to face topics of death and depression without slipping from the subject. good shit.

Rhyming wise was also pretty solid, some lines were a bit short or ended low on syllables, but the bars always connected with a rhyme and the flow worked pretty well, there was also a good show of vocab in the peice.

Overall i liked it and im lookin forward to hearin more from ya bruh.

peace.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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