This is a decent drop, it was short but precise, and it followed the beat very well... The concept was deep, true of life and times, thats what I liked about it, it was simple and followed the correct rhyme scheme... It did make ya think and had some powerful lines, the flow was tidy, more internals and it could have been smoothened... The wordplay was aight, it did show its depth but not through wordplay, jus in a life, I wonder kinda way, na'mean... A good read though, keep dropping the gems, look forward to reading more of your work...

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