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07-02-02, 11:36 PM
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Peep this...If you want!
IP: 1034 3227
[Scenario]-Listening to this beat, Getaway by Mobb Deep, just felt like spitttin...
Hopefully ya'll Hip-Hop heads know what im talking bout' Im on 'Getaway' Mission to place that's 'Un Known'... Isolated in the world; Some how I felt 'Alone'... Pick up the Rental, no delay from the 'Car Service'... Give up my life for a trip...By Far it was 'Worth it'... Why'd this thought come in my head; Didn't 'Understand'... Should I go out to the desert or the 'Main Lands'... Fuck it, i'll just 'Change Plans'...Go to a 'Strip Club'... Mabey I could relive some stress if I found a 'Bitch to Rub'... Capable of coping with this down fall some 'Other Way',,, Mabey I could be mad because my 'Lover Strayed'... I'll be to myself...As if I were 'Lonly Rebel'... 'Fresh From the Top' with this freestyle like 'Overhead Ovens'... Last edited by Direkt-Threat : 07-03-02 at 12:11 AM. |
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07-02-02, 11:51 PM
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That was a pretty good drop,it was just real short,you should have made it longer so it could go more in depth,but besides its length it was a pretty good drop.....
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07-03-02, 12:04 AM
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NICE SHIT KID KEEP FLOWIN JUST MAKE IT LONGER NEXT TIME
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07-03-02, 12:05 AM
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IP: 65A8 3F0D
IM FEELING IT NO DOUBT PEEP MY PEACE OUT
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07-03-02, 12:34 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
it had like a slow flow too it.........i got wut you ment bout tha getaway beat too.............Nice drop.......Jus make it longer next time.............Ghost.............and check out ma Open mic
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07-03-02, 01:15 PM
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IP: 1034 3227
Uppin this peice once!
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07-03-02, 06:54 PM
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IP: 1034 3227
Uppin...
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07-03-02, 10:31 PM
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IP: AD49 03FA
ayo shit was nice cuzzin, maybe prodigy and havoc would have a getaway remix with u on in lol, it was short, but that was enuff for me to get it
holla dawg 1
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07-03-02, 11:20 PM
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Thanx for responses...Uppin
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07-04-02, 08:14 PM
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IP: D069 6C00
This is a decent drop, it was short but precise, and it followed the beat very well... The concept was deep, true of life and times, thats what I liked about it, it was simple and followed the correct rhyme scheme... It did make ya think and had some powerful lines, the flow was tidy, more internals and it could have been smoothened... The wordplay was aight, it did show its depth but not through wordplay, jus in a life, I wonder kinda way, na'mean... A good read though, keep dropping the gems, look forward to reading more of your work...
Peez... |
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07-05-02, 12:12 PM
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Fuck it, i'll just 'Change Plans'...Go to a 'Strip Club'...
Mabey I could relive some stress if I found a 'Bitch to Rub'... -I liked this part the most.. keep it comin.. one |
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07-06-02, 06:08 AM
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Nice drop man...very poetic, good flow, imagery was rife throughout...
Multi's worked a treat... All in all, i liked this piece, just wished it was expanded slightly... Keep it comen... Peace n god bless |
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07-06-02, 12:32 PM
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IP: 798F 2985
Uppin...
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07-07-02, 12:03 AM
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IP: 4427 437B
Up, Up, and away...
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